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Re: Orion and the Sword of Kings - Chapters 1 & 2
Hi, Leegon. I'll review the first chapter here, and then I'll come back and review the second if you want me to. :D I like the personal conversation you have ...
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Re: Hi...?
Hey there, Rayne! :smt039 Welcome aboard. :elephant: I'm Searria, but you can call me Sea. :D I hope you are not intimidated for long. We have a wonderfully friendly community ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Stimulated Insanity Chapter 1
I'm so sorry about taking a lifetime to get back to you on this. Apologies, dawgwriter. :) I think your characters are very natural, and I like that your main ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: I've always wondered...
I think Forwards and Introductions are the same thing, aren't they? And I love your signature, too! I used to have a frog. I raised two from tadpoles, and it ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: I've always wondered...
Yay! Thank you so much. :) I love your avatar, by the way. Frogs are awesome. :D -Sea-
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: I've always wondered...
Does anyone know what the difference is between a preface and a prologue? I've tried doing some research on it, and I keep getting a variety of answers. Anyone know? ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Howdy!
Hi, number32! :smt039 Welcome to the site. Well, it sounds like you're in the right place. :D Everyone here is extremely helpful and encouraging. You need 100 points to post ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: The Legend of the Sands
Hi, Ranger51! So, I'm finally here to review as you requested about two months ago. :oops: Sorry about that. You are very in tune with the fantasy style with your ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Hey!
:smt039 Welcome to YWS! :elephant: I'm Searria Haux, though most people just call me "Sea." I love penguins! They're adorable, but I would never want once because they stink. ;) ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: What's your favourite word?
Let's see... Quadruple: because everything is better in fours. Hippopotomonstrosesquipedaliophobia: just because I think it's ironic that it's the fear of long words Perpetrator: someone who commits a
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: The Hunt [in action]
Querp A great monster rose from the water. Querp gave a small squeak, feeling his legs begin to collapse at the knee. He began sputtering as the sea monster gracefully ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Help!!!
:smt039 Hi, peachyturtle! Welcome to YWS. :elephant: If you want your own personal guide to get you around the site, you can get a mentor from The Buddy System. A ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Pink Tassels; 150 words
Hi, Dreamwalker! :) I don’t know how harsh I’ll be, but I’ll do my best. ;) I liked the general imagery and concept of this piece with the boy and ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: The Hunt [in action]
Querp The offer was tempting, and Querp had never been one to resist temptation with any sort of success. But he had never heard of a Watermaiden; how could he ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The Hunt [in action]
Querp "Don't stare at my gills. I need them to breathe." How could he not stare? Gills weren't exactly something everyone had. Nor did they have such stringy, greenish hair. ...
Jul 27, 2011
